xanthan gum

i agree with snoink, as i did not enjoy the second stanza as much as the other two. the first was absolutely beautiful. i love the image of rain on ...

my tongue is dry now, you don't need the "now". it's extra. i kept eyes peeled for your blue cap. blue cap? an odd image. otherwise, i loved the ending ...

my.... your what? there's no closure. there's no suspense about it, either, so it's sort of dull. emancipated by his own his own what? i suppose the commas are okay ...

loved this - short, meaningful and beautiful. It's always sou'east by south why southeast by south? is there some signifigance to these directions or is it just completely random? either ...

not really rhythmatic, but we won't get into this. the only part that i must object to is this: lost my hand like it’s not been lost this was a ...

well, the poem to...um...xanthan gum is short, but particularly beautiful. i really don't have much to say about it, but thank you for following through on my request. It seems ...

about the swing that won't stop swinging it's blue someone should be on it rocks are everywhere I'm barefoot my feet have begun to bleed I look around no one ...

i'm flattering, darling, really. in fact, i'd say i'm laughing so hard i can barely breathe :lol: never get yourself down so much. you really aren't that bad of a ...

good rant...bad poem. You're the bossy pushy son of a -- No, you're not. Grandma is much more nicer than you She doesn't tell me what's what Unless I ASK ...

ummm. well, there is no rhythm. or if there is, i have to read it really...oddly. if that's correct grammar, which i doubt... clean rooms stink! not very poetic. its ...

It’s quite hilarious, is it not? That I, a mere stranger writes about you so I dare not mock But the deviousness of it all makes the giggles all the ...

i liked the incorporation of the poem "Tyger, tyger" - i am unsure who it is by, but I am certain I've read it before. The rhyme/rhythm in this section ...

i'm daunted. so i'll take a really deep breath and begin. all right. this is rant-y. but you rant well. you have to clean up your spelling, but i wouldn't ...

wow. i popped this in the translator and it was beautiful. then i stopped bothered my boyfriend (he speaks spanish well) and had him read it to me. all in ...

are all that life has offer are all that life has to offer Life has given me weaknesses, Life has given me strength, but I'll use all my weaknesses, to ...